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Edit your own screenplay with 23 proven tools
A recorded workshop that takes you from diagnosing the whole story to polishing single scenes, with a checklist you can apply to your draft straight away.
- 23 self-editing tools
- Recorded, watch any time
- Practical checklist included
- 14-day refund policy
Why a finished draft is only the beginning
Most screenwriters know the moment. The first draft is done, the last page is written, and instead of satisfaction there is a vague unease. Something is not working, but it is hard to say what. The middle drags, a character feels flat, a scene that seemed brilliant at midnight reads strangely in the morning.
Professional editors are very good at naming those problems, but they are not always available, and they are not free. Feedback from friends is kind and rarely precise. So many writers end up rewriting at random: changing dialogue when the structure is the real issue, or rebuilding the structure when two scenes simply need to be cut.
This course teaches you to do the editor's first pass yourself. It is built around a set of 23 self-editing tools, arranged in the order you would actually use them: first you look at the story as a whole, then at its parts, and only at the end at the sentences on the page.
The aim is not to replace outside readers. It is to hand them a stronger draft, to waste less time on the wrong fixes, and to build the habit of reading your own work with a clear, structured eye.
What you will be able to do
- Diagnose a story from the top down
Spot whether the weakness lies in the premise, the structure, the characters or the scenes.
- Choose the right fix for each problem
Match every issue to a specific tool rather than rewriting blindly.
- Test whether a scene earns its place
Decide what to keep, shorten, merge or cut.
- Sharpen the dramatic shape of a scene
Check goal, conflict and turn inside each scene.
- Tighten action lines and dialogue
Remove padding and repetition so the page reads quickly.
- Review your draft in a fixed sequence
Work from large problems to small ones so effort is never wasted.
- Use a checklist as a repeatable routine
Apply the same review to every future draft.
- Prepare a cleaner draft for other readers
Send out work that is ready for outside feedback.
- 23
- self-editing tools
- 6
- modules
- 1
- practical checklist
- 14 days
- refund window
The method: from the whole story to a single scene
Editing goes wrong when it starts in the wrong place. Polishing a line of dialogue is pointless if the scene around it will later be cut. That is why the tools in this course are ordered by scale.
You begin with story-level diagnostics, which tell you what kind of problem you have. Then you move to sequences and scenes, where the dramatic work happens. Finally you polish the text itself. At every stage you finish one pass before beginning the next.
- Start with the story, not the sentences
- One tool for one question
- Finish each pass before the next
- Use the checklist to track progress
How the course works
The course is a recorded workshop, so you can watch it whenever it suits you and pause to work on your own pages. It is organised into six modules that follow the order of a real editing pass, from first diagnosis to final polish.
Each tool is explained and then applied, so you see how the idea behaves on a real story problem. The best way to learn is to keep your own draft open next to the video and try each tool on it as you go.
A checklist accompanies the course so you can turn the tools into a routine. Many students find it useful to work through one module per sitting and then spend a few days applying it before moving on, but the pace is entirely yours.
The programme
Six modules that follow the order of a real editing pass, covering all 23 tools.
1Module 1 — Reading your draft like an editorStep back from the text and prepare for a structured review.
- Why self-editing needs a system
- Getting distance from your own draft
- Setting up your review: what to look at first
- Using the checklist from start to finish
2Module 2 — Diagnosing the storyFind out where the real problem is before changing anything.
- Testing the premise and the central question
- Checking what the main character wants and why
- Locating the point where the story loses energy
- Sorting problems into story, character and scene issues
3Module 3 — Structure and sequencesMake the shape of the story work.
- Reviewing the story's turning points
- Finding sequences that repeat themselves
- Fixing a sagging middle
- Reordering and merging scenes
4Module 4 — Characters and relationshipsMake people on the page feel specific and driven.
- Checking each character's purpose in the story
- Spotting characters who only react
- Testing relationships for real conflict
5Module 5 — Working with individual scenesTools for judging and improving each scene.
- Asking what changes in this scene
- Finding the goal, the obstacle and the turn
- Deciding whether to keep, shorten or cut
- Entering late and leaving early
- Making sure each scene pushes the next one
6Module 6 — Polishing the textThe final pass on action lines and dialogue.
- Cutting padding in action lines
- Removing repetition and on-the-nose dialogue
- Reading the script aloud and listening for rhythm
- Running the final checklist pass
What you get
- A recorded workshop in video format
Watch at your own pace on any device.
- 23 self-editing tools
Explained step by step, from diagnosis to polish.
- A practical checklist
Apply the tools to your own draft in the right order.
- Six clearly ordered modules
A path that mirrors a real editing pass.
- Ongoing access to the material
Return to any tool whenever you start a new draft.
- A 14-day refund policy
Try the course and decide with no pressure.
Is this course for you?
This course is for you if…
- Aspiring screenwriters with a finished or nearly finished draft
- Writers who sense that something is wrong but cannot name it
- Authors preparing a script or pitch to show to other readers
- Writers of series, features or shorts who want a repeatable review routine
Probably not a fit if…
- Anyone looking for personal feedback on their own script from a tutor
- Complete beginners who have not yet written any pages and want a course on writing basics
- Those hoping for a guaranteed sale or production of their script
After the course
When you finish, you will open a draft differently. Instead of rereading from page one with a general feeling of dissatisfaction, you will know where to look first and which tool to reach for.
You will be able to tell a structural problem from a scene problem and a scene problem from a line-level one, and to deal with each in the right order. Fewer hours will go into rewrites that change nothing.
You will also have a checklist you can reuse for every project. That makes your next draft cleaner at the start and your conversations with editors and readers more focused, because you will arrive having already solved the obvious problems.
Questions before you buy
How much time do I need each week?
There is no fixed schedule. Many students set aside a few hours a week to watch a module and apply it to their own draft, but you can go faster or slower.
Do I need any experience?
You should have a screenplay draft, or at least a substantial part of one, to practise on. No formal training in screenwriting is required.
How does access work after payment?
Once your payment is confirmed, you get access to the course materials in your account and can start straight away.
What is the refund policy?
You can request a refund within 14 days of purchase if the course is not what you expected.
What format are the lessons in?
The course is a recorded video workshop with a practical checklist to work through alongside your own pages.
Will the material stay available?
Yes. You can return to the lessons and the checklist whenever you begin a new draft.
Is this suitable for series as well as features?
The tools work on the story, the scene and the text, so they apply to scripts of different formats and genres.
Will I get personal feedback on my script?
No. The course teaches you to review your own work. It does not include individual script analysis.
Make your next draft your strongest
Get the 23 tools and the checklist, and start editing with a clear plan.